Talk:Mew-Arceus Relationship/@comment-26836594-20150830101937/@comment-47.152.38.204-20170129194003

I see that you tried to create a deep moment for the reader. However, basically a "goddess" that came first, has the power to create Mew and Arceus out of thin air, but instead of just continuing to create more eggs how she did the first, she wants to fuck her son from now on instead? Sounds like it has more incestuous reasoning than reproduction, just saying, there's a huge gaping incestuous hole in your plot.